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You're ripping out her heart.
You're tearing it in two.
You're doing all the things you promised you would never do.
She can't believe it's over.
She hears it in your sighs.
She won't believe the words of hate,
it's different in your eyes.
She won't want you to leave her,
She will not say "goodbye."
She'll try her best, figure out the rest,
to believe your petty lies.
She'll tell you that you're crazy,
you'll say that you don't care.
She'll memorize your every word,
the weather and the air.
And finally you'll leave her,
and say your last goodbyes.
But before you even turn your back,
she'll sadly start to cry.
You'll keep walking forward
leaving her behind.
And then she'll get the strangest thoughts
that you deserve to die.
Images will start to play
of your new planned demise.
She'll tear your fucking heart out,
ignoring all your cries.
The blood will start to flood,
like a river to the sea,
and finally it'll be THE END
of what was
you and she.
First of all this is from 6/16/2011 and second, it isn't about anyone in particular. Not about me either. I was bored in the library waiting for school to get out last year and ended up writing.. a couple of my friends were going through some relationship crap and i guess this is what my brain spewed out for them. I wasn't gonna put this up but my friend said it was "really good" so I put it up anyway.

I'm not putting mature content on this cuz there's only one "bad word" and it's not too bad... soooooo..

Enjoy <3
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Hildugard Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Student Artist
Hi Lauren, :wave: I'm your Dad's FB friend John Watson.
I'll give this piece a 7.8.
Chibi-Kibo Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
AlwayslovelessNever Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
this is amazing lauren and i even just sung it to myself with my own tune i made up :) i love it. its perfect
Chibi-Kibo Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks and that's awesome ^^ you'll have to sing it for me sometime lol. I hadn't intended it to be a song but it could be i spose lol ^^
AlwayslovelessNever Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
sing what?
Chibi-Kibo Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your tune you made up? idk. you don't have to lol.
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